Tuesday, November 9, 2010


EDITORIAL:
Increased
budget,
increased improvement


It is a hope that the quality of Philippine education will perk up as the proposed education budget for 2011 will be passed mid-December by the Senate and the House.
Budget Secretary Florencio Abad said that the increase by P32.3 billion to P175 billion will be the largest for the department in over a decade. Definitely the increase will somehow mend what the Philippine educational system is lacking of. The increase will no doubt ease the lack of 21 000 classrooms, 4.1 million school seats, 10 000 teachers, and thousand pieces of textbooks.

It can be remembered that in 2009, 13 % increase was added from 2008 education budget, summing up a P167.9 billion allotment for the education department to ease the perennial problems the department is facing. The increase continued in 2010 and up to this year’s budget.

As a result based on the National Achievement Test in the past three years, pupils’ learning performance increases as the education budget increases. If the allocation of budget is positively affecting the education, the government is in right track in meeting one of the Millennium Development Goals which is providing education for all Filipinos to eradicate illiteracy.

It is therefore, imperative to the government to allot more to education in order to eventually lift Philippine educational system from its deteriorating and in grim and dismal state.

It is vital that the education budget be increased so that our hope for quality education boosts.

13 comments:

  1. SUNSHINE M. REMANESES
    V-SPED
    This article is an editorial that is made up of opinion about the issue of increasing 2011 educational budget.
    This shows the element of significance in increasing 2011 budget.

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  2. Mythaddy A. dela Cuesta
    VI-sped

    Issue:Increased budget,increased improvement.
    Opinion:It can be remembered that in 2009, 13 % increase was added from 2008 education budget, summing up a P167.9 billion allotment for the education department to ease the perennial problems the department is facing. The increase continued in 2010 and up to this year’s budget.

    My opinion:The government should increased budget for education in order to have quality education and to solve the problem of lack of classrooms,lack of textbooks and other problems of school.

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  3. Ken B. Rivera
    VI-SPED
    It is vital that the education budget be increased so that our hope for quality education boosts. =simple sentence

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  4. Myhaddy A. dela Cuesta
    VI-SPED
    As a result based on the National Achievement Test in the past three years.=simple(CS+SP)

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  5. Juvileanne Nuñez
    6-SPED
    The increase continued in 2010 and up to this year’s budget.
    (simple sentence)

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  6. Jacin Ruth P.Pascual
    6-SPED

    5.As a result based on the National Achievement Test in the past three years, pupils’ learning performance increases as the education budget increases.

    (compound sentence)

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  7. ALYANNA MARIE C. MALLARI
    VI-SPED

    6.It is a hope that the quality of Philippine education will perk up.
    =SIMPLE SENTENCE

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  8. Definitely an increase in budget allocation in the education system will greatly help uplift the qualilty of education in the country.

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  10. JEAH ALTHEA P. GODOY
    VI - SPED

    Issue: Increased budget, increased imrpovement
    Opinion: If the allocation of budget is positively affecting the education, the government is in right track in meeting one of the Millennium Development Goals which is providing education for all Filipinos to eradicate illiteracy.

    It is vital that the education budget be increased so that our hope for quality education boosts.

    Kind of Lead: What Lead

    Proof 1: It can be remembered that in 2009, 13 % increase was added from 2008 education budget, summing up a P167.9 billion allotment for the education department to ease the perennial problems the department is facing.

    Proof 2:As a result based on the National Achievement Test in the past three years, pupils’ learning performance increases as the education budget increases.

    Proof 3: The increase will no doubt ease the lack of 21 000 classrooms, 4.1 million school seats, 10 000 teachers, and thousand pieces of textbooks.

    Kind of conclusion: Strong Statement

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  11. Angela Thea Lucido
    V-SPED

    1. What is the title of the article? Ans: Increased budget, increased improvement
    2. What is the lead? Ans: It is a hope that the quality of Philippine education will perk up as the proposed education budget for 2011 will be passed mid-December by the Senate and the House.
    3. What is the issue? Ans: the quality of Philippine education will perk up as the proposed education budget for 2011 will be passed mid-December by the Senate and the House.
    4. What is the opinion of the writer about the issue? Ans: It is a hope
    5. What kind of lead is used? Ans: Predictive lead

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  12. Name: Karyll Joy Campos
    Gr.& Sec. VI-SPED
    Issue-the quality of Philippine education will perk up as the proposed education budget for 2011 will be passed mid-December by the Senate and the House.

    Opinion-the government is in right track in meeting one of the Millennium Development Goals which is providing education for all Filipinos to eradicate illiteracy.

    Kind of Lead- Predictive

    Proof 1- It can be remembered that in 2009, 13 % increase was added from 2008 education budget, summing up a P167.9 billion allotment for the education department to ease the perennial problems the department is facing. The increase continued in 2010 and up to this year’s budget.

    Proof 2- Budget Secretary Florencio Abad said that the increase by P32.3 billion to P175 billion will be the largest for the department in over a decade. Definitely the increase will somehow mend what the Philippine educational system is lacking of. The increase will no doubt ease the lack of 21 000 classrooms, 4.1 million school seats, 10 000 teachers, and thousand pieces of textbooks.

    Proof 3- As a result based on the National Achievement Test in the past three years, pupils’ learning performance increases as the education budget increases.

    Kind of Conlusion- Suggestive

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    1. Rachel nina t. castillo V-SPED
      1.What is the title of the article?
      ANS.Increase Budget, Increase Improvement
      2.What is the lead?
      ANS.It is a hope that the quality of Philippine education will perk up as the propose education budget for 2011 will be passed mid-December by the senate and the house.
      3.What is the issue?
      ANS.The quality of Philippine education will perk up as the proposed education budget for 2011 will be passed mid- December by the senate and the House.
      4.What is the opinion of the writer about the issue?
      ANS.It is a hope.
      5.What kind of lead is used?
      ANS.Predictive lead

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