Medical-dental, deworming availed
JUST like Santa Claus who comes once a year, the division medical and dental team again visits Camp Tinio Elementary School (CTES) not to bring gifts just like Santa but to offer medical, dental and deworming services which they made available to pupils every year.
Over a thousand pupils were dewormed and given medical attention focusing in the respiratory problems of the pupils.
Last year, approximately the same number of pupils who availed the services this year was also given vitamin supplement headed by the division’s medical team Dr. Frank Narag.
According to the team the perennial visit it conducts supports the development of the pupils not only medically but also academically, for the pupils will not become academically successful if diseases hinder them.
I LIKE IT BECAUSE IT HAS A GOOD INFLUENCE AND ENCOURAGE STUDENTS ESPECIALLY GRADESCHOOL PUPILS.
ReplyDeleteTHERE IS ONLY TWO ELEMENTS THE NAMES AND PROXIMITY.
IT FOLLOWS THE INVERTED TRIANGLE AND THE STRUCTURE OF THESE IS A PROGRAM NEWS...
IT MENTION NAMES AT THE 4TH PARAGRAPH AND THE KIND OF THESE NEWS IS A PROGRAM NEWS
IT CAN LIGHTEN THEIR BURDEN AND LESSEN THEIR MEDICAL EXPENSES.
BY:KIMBERLY MAE SANCHEZ-MUSNI
GRADE VI-SPED(CTES)
THANK YOU!!!:)
Good job to the members of the Medical mission team to CTES. Hopefully, they come from a private sector wherein, they can served those students or pupils from the Government schools in particular by voluntary services. We the students of CTES are hoping for more Medical services not only "once a year" but "twice or trice a year" & Medical Team are coming from a Government Sector in itself. To date, CTES doesn't have its own Medical Clinic inside the school premises. The Medical mission team has a great help on us. Mabuhay kayo.
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Over a thousand pupils were dewormed and given medical attention focusing in the respiratory problems of the pupils.
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Over a thousand pupils were dewormed and given medical attention focusing in the respiratory problems of the pupils.
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ReplyDeleteA. The lead of the news article.
Just like Santa Claus who comes once a year,the division medical and dental team again visits Camp Tinio Elementary School (CTES) not to bring gifts but to offer medical,dental and deworming services which they made available to pupils every year.
B.The dominant element in the lead are Names and Proximity or Nearness.
C.the Wh-questions answered in the lead:
What:The division medical and dental team again visits Camp Tinio Elementary School (CTES)
When:Once a year
Where:Camp Tinio Elementary School (CTES)
Who:Pupils
Why:To offer medical,dental and deworming services to the pupils
How:By visiting to CTES once a year